The Stone -05 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Stone -05

Rating: 5.0


Then there was
The emergence of a species
The homo sapiens,
Who made all the differences.

They turned me theirs
Their home in thecaves
The weapons in their hands
The Gods and Demons
Shrines andtemples and
Pillars in the Graveyard
They made me their tool-
The tools of survival
The tools of revival
The tools of war and peace
The tools of love and worship.

I paved the ways for
Trades and Traditions,
Fairs and Celebrations,
Rituals and Practices,
Affairs and Promises.

I was the witness of
All that they possessed
Dreams,
Desires,
Dynasties,
Diversitiesin Culture,
Customsand Civilizations.

The Stone -05
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 11 July 2016

They made me their tool- The tools of survival The tools of revival The tools of war and peace The tools of love and worship. Yes stones being used as God and as weapon as well... Beautiful concept.10 marks. Thanks for the lovely poem.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 19 November 2017

I was the witness of All that they possessed Dreams, Desires, Dynasties, Diversitiesin Culture, Customsand Civilizations. It's a lovely poem.Thanks for sharing it10+++++

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Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

I was the witness of All that they possessed Dreams, Desires, Dynasties, Diversities in Culture, Customs and Civilizations. Lovely, stunning, quite enjoyable. 10++++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 October 2016

Another wonderful poem that needs deep pondering. How the stone evolved into a man with intellect and emotion. As a witness, a fabulous series of poetic excellence!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 21 October 2017

Thank you revered Ma'am for your inspiring words. Sorry for the great delayed response.

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Sabita Sahoo 20 July 2016

I paved the ways for Trades and Traditions, Fairs and Celebrations, Rituals and Practices, Affairs and Promises. Wow..what a lovely series of poems. Will you please continue it till you can, please? ? I loved it very much. Thanks for sharing.10+++ for this new kind of poem.

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Anita Aparajita Das 20 July 2016

I was the witness of All that they possessed Dreams, Desires, Dynasties, Diversities in Culture, Customs and Civilizations. Beautifully proceeding, Subhas. Please continue and make it a series of 100 lovely poems. 10++ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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