Nostalgia Reborn Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Nostalgia Reborn

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While you whispered
In my ears of longing
Those few secrets of love
Highly inspiring and touching...

Your words were strange,
Over the hours of your stay,
Underneath those verses of care
Roses of my last dream did lay!

Lots of pleasure and loads
Of pain we had undergone
Veiled within those moments
Engulfing my heart lovelorn!

After you spoke about her,
Never could I believe, nor did I
Dare bypassing her in my life.

Concerns of your voice,
Age old inspirations-cum-orders
Rose inside my soul to welcome
Entering of a new lovely Princess! !


Cuttack, CDA 1,
27 March 2015

Saturday, March 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,longing,love,love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 30 April 2016

While you whispered In my ears of longing Those few secrets of love Highly inspiring and touching... Your words were strange, Over the hours of your stay, Underneath those verses of care Roses of my last dream did lay! Beautiful poem Sir, but where are my poem quota for today? You need to promise me Sir to deliver all those old poems you had written years ago and publish them all in this large forum the Poem hunter. Please Sir, Please. I would expect you to upload 5 poems today too. 10 for this one. Seema Devi.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 20 May 2016

Your words were strange, Over the hours of your stay, Underneath those verses of care Roses of my last dream did lay! Love the lines in the poem. Thanks for the poem and full marks to it. Sanjukta.

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Thanks dear Sanjukta for your kind visit and gracious remarks.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 29 September 2017

I agree with you dear poet, its a great poem. All the lines are lovelorn.

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Manisha Rani Baral 13 December 2020

Loved the lines Your words were strange, Over the hours of your stay, Underneath those verses of care Roses of my last dream did lay! Thank you for the sharing.

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Prativa Rani 05 December 2020

Beautiful in every aspect of a poem..it is so much fascinating Sir.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 10 November 2018

This is a great poem...so beautiful poem.............. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Sabita Sahoo 30 June 2018

Your words were strange, Over the hours of your stay, Underneath those verses of care Roses of my last dream did lay! Beautiful poem shared.

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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

Roses of my last dream did lay! Really it has written with deep love and friendship. Thanks for sharing

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Thanks dear Prativa for the lovely remarks and these great words of encouragement.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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