The Social Status Of Mom Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

The Social Status Of Mom

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MAMMA sits with her blue eyed child,
this kids a plastic saint, she looks
like her father, the one that ran
away.
THERES laughter in the back ground,
and a dog in the yard, and the silence
of a broken home, and a heart thats
full of pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 18 May 2006

Short, concise, to the point, and very emotional.... Great one. Preets

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Tracey Collins 17 May 2006

well writen poem for being short but right to the point. It is hard being a single mom and dealing with a broken heart.

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DAVID...SAD STORY WITH HIGH EMOTIONAL VALUE...GOOD KINETICS FOR A SHORT PIECE...TEN FOR THE '' STATUS''! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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***** ********* 17 May 2006

It is so sad to see the pain being passed on to the wee whipper snappers David. But at least she is keeping her family together, where they are watched over. Smiling Tai

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