The Smile She Gave Me Poem by Phil Whittaker

The Smile She Gave Me

Rating: 4.5


It came from her but within myself too,
She gave me that quiet confidence boost,
Just simple words and the odd I love you,
But that smile, it made up for the most,
It gave me the affect of being taller than stars,
My favourite person, no one compares to my love,
Not the beauty of Venus, or the Wrath of Mars,
Could vanquish the feeling inside she wove,
I could look taller than giants, and armies defeat,
Champions would never best me,
I'd lay there heads at her feet,
If only me and her, we could be,
Oh yes, that will be a devine feat.
We will never be alone, we will never meet.
Just wish I could see that smile she gave me,
It would light my life, and set my spirit free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Riquetta Elliott 08 May 2008

This is a very nice and sweet poem Phil keep it up.

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Mary-Elizabeth Conn 01 May 2006

That is the sweetest thing ever! Aww lol etc. It's simplicity but so much more- she is one lucky girl! Talk to ya later, :) xXx

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Dana Tyrrell 28 April 2006

a very sweet and tragic poem, i truly hope you tell this person how you feel smiling at you, ~Dana~

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