The Selfless One Is Gone Poem by A B Faniki

The Selfless One Is Gone

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By heavens! The selfless one, she is gone.
Brave as a lion she fought for just cause;
If courage means fearless, then she is courageous;
If today's cubs are tomorrow's lions, then she births lions.

I have seen humanity's darkest side: greed and ego;
But no such darkness in her whole being.
In my sojourn on earth, l knew peace and love;
'Cause your deeds toward men translate into self-sacrifice.

Before I could say Jack Robinson, it happened;
Yesterday she was here, today she is gone. The Nile
Flows into the sea, emptying itself there: nature rules;
So the selfless one has gone home to her maker.

Adonia, I can't fathom why you always call the
Selfless ones home first; you called the last I know.

Thursday, September 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Good people it seem are always tge ones that death takes ate earky in life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 23 January 2020

A moving sonnet to a good person, who is gone too soon.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 05 January 2020

A beautifully written, touching tribute to a caring and wonderful person. It brings to mind the song, " Abraham, Martin and John."

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A B Faniki 06 January 2020

Thank you for the kind comment it made my day and oh! The song have my name what a coincidence. Have a wounderful day

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Savita Tyagi 26 September 2019

A wonderful tribute to all the good people on earth with such a beautiful words. An excellent poem.

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A B Faniki 05 January 2020

Thank you for the wonderful comment and For taking the time to read my poem. Cheer

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2019

A poignant yet beautiful poem. Very touching. Yes, death takes all and we are sometimes caught unaware. Well thought and conveyed write.

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Mj Lemon 21 September 2019

So much raw emotion. The last two lines, so poignant. A wonderful verse, A B.

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A B Faniki 04 October 2019

Thank you for the the wonderful comment. Have a lovely day

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A B Faniki 04 October 2019

Thank you.: -) remain blessed

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A B Faniki 04 October 2019

Thank you for this wonderful comment and for taking the time to read my work. Cheers: -)

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