The Rising Sun- 02 Poem by Ranjan Kumar Ghosh

The Rising Sun- 02

Rating: 4.3


Rays of Sunshine

smiles in the lips

of the beautiful Earth.


Droplets of dew

on the rain bathed lawn

dazzle like pearl.



Mother of all Energy

The Sun, awakens

all the world

the world of animals and plants

every one eager to run.



He teaches a virtue

like his rays to suck

water pleasant or dirty

and pour rains of

pure water

for all the thirsty earth.



So, people must acquire

Virtue divine and

reject the vices

of others, like the Sun.

Saturday, November 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: awakening,nature,sunrise
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendra Rout 05 November 2017

Mother of all Energy The Sun, awakens all the world the world of animals and plants every one eager to run.lovely line.thanks for shairing......10++++++

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 08 November 2017

Thanks for comment

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Paresh Chakra 24 November 2018

virtue like his rays to suck water pleasant or dirty and pour rains of pure water for all the thirsty earthy. I like this line

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 28 October 2018

WHAT A NICE POEM. I LIKE THIS POEM. THANK YOU.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 December 2017

Droplets of dew on the rain dazzle with gaining touch of rising sun. Sun teaches virtue with beauty of light. An amazing imagery is drawn in this brilliant poem...10

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 04 January 2018

Thanks poet for your lovely and fantastic comment

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Susan Williams 15 December 2017

acquire Virtue divine and reject the vices of others, - - - - - - - - - - - - -I appreciate how you describe images and glide into a thought given birth by what you saw in that image. Well done! ! !

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 16 December 2017

Thanks madam nice remark

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Paresh Chakra 10 December 2017

of the beautiful Earth.so beautiful line 10+++++++

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ranjan 12 December 2017

Thanks parish for your nice and lovely comment

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