Sandra Feldman


The Right To Be Free Inspired By This Pharse 'All Of Mankind Should Be Free' Written By My Dear Friend And Poet Luareat, Valerie Dohren - Poem by Sandra Feldman

The freedom to love,
The freedom to chose,
The freedom to Be,
To win or to lose,
The freedom to fly,
To Worlds, yet not known,
The freedom to go,
Where no one has flown,
The freedom to live,
A dream that was dreamt,
Your heart, your ideas
That nobody bent,
The freedom to be and not to not be
As an Individual, to always be Free


Comments about The Right To Be Free Inspired By This Pharse 'All Of Mankind Should Be Free' Written By My Dear Friend And Poet Luareat, Valerie Dohren by Sandra Feldman

  • Robert Murray Smith (2/10/2017 10:34:00 PM)


    Freedom is in the mind. ++10



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    ps the heading needs correction.
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  • (12/25/2016 2:24:00 PM)

    The Right To Be Free
    The freedom to write
    Openly honestly
    Without any fear
    Of public ridicule
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  • Kathy Van Kurin (11/30/2016 4:24:00 PM)

    The right to be free
    Sandra Freedmon,
    The freedom to be, to win or to loose. This bit right here really stuck out! I have not read your works before so this was refreshing. Thanks for encouraging my heart. Blessings in your wonderful writing. Kathy
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  • Rebecca Navarre (10/29/2016 8:10:00 PM)


    Yes! Yes! Yes! ! ! ! ! ! Wonderful Write! ! ! ! Words Of Truth
    That Flow So Beautifully! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You AGAIN! ! ! ! !
    Sandra! ! ! ! ! ! Truly Beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++
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  • Dan Reynolds (10/28/2015 8:38:00 AM)


    Lovely piece. you may have a little edit to do. chose should probably be choose, and you might want to swap round To Worlds, yet not known, to To Worlds, not yet known,
    Subjective I guess, but seems to flow better.
    Danny
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  • (8/20/2015 4:47:00 PM)


    Slavery, in all forms is hideous. Good clean write. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/15/2015 11:36:00 AM)


    A simple yet powerful perspective! (Report) Reply

  • Captain Herbert Poetry (5/14/2015 8:31:00 PM)


    To be free in sharing our thoughts and expressions in poetry
    Freedom to uplift moral things
    God bless your poetry, Sandra
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  • Daniel Brick (5/5/2015 3:23:00 PM)


    This is a poem that takes no prisoners! It is the ultimate statement of freedom as the essence of life. In fact the word freedom appears so often there's no room left for a countervailing word like WISDOM or GRACE or KNOWLEDGE. But those words have their own secure orbits, they don't get challenged, abused, ignored like freedom. I can hear Richie Havens at the beginning of the WOODSTOCK FESTIVAL singing FREEDOM over and over until a whole generation believed in it.
    Amen to that!
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  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (2/15/2015 1:05:00 AM)


    Three faceted freedom - right, responsibility and duty. Great thinking. I love the poem. (Report) Reply

  • (2/14/2015 12:19:00 AM)


    The freedom to be and not to be......Great writing. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (12/7/2014 3:51:00 PM)


    Such beautiful words Sandra. Loved reading them (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (7/13/2013 5:28:00 AM)


    The freedom to be and not to not be
    As an Individual, to always be Free
    Unfettered freedom is a natural human instinct. A nice poem to read.
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  • Roy Allen (6/30/2013 3:28:00 AM)


    Great poets think alike. I was prompted to write a poem on freedom a couple of days ago and I am pleasantly surprised to see how similar our two poems are (Though I prefer your rhythm and rhyme to mine) .

    Roy
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  • Heather Wilkins (6/22/2013 10:40:00 PM)


    freedom is our right. Yes freedom is a responsibility. good read (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (6/19/2013 12:09:00 PM)


    Great write Sandra, and thank you for the acknowledgement - I am humbled. (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2013 5:57:00 PM)


    yeah, freedom is our right but freedom is our responsibility too
    nice work and thanks for sharing
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  • (6/18/2013 5:44:00 PM)


    Be free sandra because youre poem set me free (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 19, 2013


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