The trick is to take
your eye off the ball - forget
and enjoy yourself.
When you realize
- ultimately, life's a
suicide mission.
Do the flowers fret
even as they bloom? Are swans
gracefully worried?
Ignore that small voice
- enjoy life's pleasures, thrills,
and delight in love.
Excellent Senryu series. Ignore that small voice - enjoy life's pleasures, thrills, and delight in love.
We need to flip your age from 17 to 71. The wisdom in your poem is deep. Well done. Ok ok...17+71÷2=44. Thats better. The wisdom of a 44 year old
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A well penned poem.... Truly impressive and fabulous.....5 stars*****