derek dudek

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The Redemption - Poem by derek dudek

Sun lit skies & hurricanes

warp around the brutal taming
of her precious little angels

whispers crawling....

panting through the warpaint of travesty

shadows faintly grasping at her only
Ray of light

courageous & decadent

melancholy,
soon becoming laughter

as the gods scream,
tumbling through

sun lit skies & hurricanes

menacing disasters shyly crumble at her feet

oh...
PLAY WITH ME
you smitten, fallen ego

take me home
and
PLAY WITH ME

all I see
are...

sun lit skies and hurricanes

acting catatonic,
oh so tragic

come on and cry for me
one more time!
*
*
*
I'm alive and well
you're so, condescending!
*
*
*
dancing with tainted faded memories...
across...

sun lit skies & hurricanes

caressing this crippled calm before the storm

Cutting fearlessly through these...

*sun lit skies & hurricanes*

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  • Gold Star - 19,531 Points Kelly Kurt (3/31/2015 6:33:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem, Derek. Thanks for sharing it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 12, 2015


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