The Perfect Past Poem by Laila laila

The Perfect Past

Rating: 4.8


Once love did exist,
and so did the trust.
every act, emotion and minute,
i lived to the fullest.

The mirror on the wall had a face...
I got into your life feeling secure and safe.
like a little child on the swing i laughed..
and you promised to share every thing half n half.

I remember, i felt like a bird with you by my side
O ' happiness you lived so short and died.
you were the one, i looked upon., , , , ,
and with just your name, i could go on and on.....

Your thoughts were so liberal.. Mind so broad..
your embrace so soothing, n arms so vast..
What more did i ask, except for those moments to last.

Alas! life is so strange, , ,
i saw you gradually change, , ,
your ego shot to fame, and all you did, , was nothing
but brought me shame..

Your marathon against responsibilities
grew larger than life,
you took me your slave, ,
seldom a wife.

Folks of the town, witnessed and said, , , get up gurl, ,
wear your dignity, , and move on,
Here comes my lame excuses again, ,
i pacify my self n drag along a little more
till iam numb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scott Clark 01 August 2010

'Get up gurl'. It is so easy for others to tell you what to do but only you stand in your shoes. I hope you find a new love, life goes by too quickly to not enjoy it.

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