The Other Me Poem by twilight by the river

The Other Me



Blurry vision in a stormy night
Wondering what to do right
Where did i lose my peace of mind
That i'm craving so hard to find
Being here consumed me
I'm just a walking shell
With no existing memory
Chasing my silent heart beats

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hussein Ahmed 09 May 2010

Great poem that conveys the feeling of emptiness quite well. I like how this developed from 'Blurry vision in a stormy night', ie. confusion/unclearness, to just emptiness. Please take a look at my poems if you would. Peace.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 May 2010

Chasing my silent heart beats likedthis expression write and share. Good luck to u invite u to read my poems too. God blesss

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