The Old Copper Pipe By Mai Venn Poem by Mai Murphy Venn

The Old Copper Pipe By Mai Venn

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A disregarded piece of copper pipe laid on the ground.
The strong wind blew and as it did it made a soft sound.
Such a sad haunting melody that Induced floods of tears.
I recollect nights of prowling shadows imposing fears.
Then, as the gale arose, it blew the solitary pipe on its way.
As it went, I listened to the phantom tune that it did play.
At last, the sound began to mingle into the storms rage
Inside my four walls, I felt like a prisoner within a cage.
That old copper pipe was free but It was on its own.
So was I, I was confined, trapped but safe in my own home.
Next day the sun gleamed, it was so calm and so quiet
As I walked the lane my eyes strayed then glance at a sight
That old copper piped had found a far better home
It was embedded in mud with another and no longer alone

Sunday, August 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: old memory
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the building sight had lots of old bits of copper around but they scatter around the street,
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 August 2016

Cooper pipe made so amazing soft sound. That old copper piped had found a far better home. Very amazing memory was shared....10

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