The Night Sky Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
The Night Sky
Designed is the night sky with the stars’ sleekness,
Silvery like the eyes wondrous in meekness.
Heavenly to have been clothed with sweetness
Gleaming like the sheen found on rocks of neatness
Exquisite in worth never screened as cheapness.
Penetrating to fill the heart with deepness,
Inspirational to compel one into keenness,
Cool to cure the mind perturbed by meanness.
Designed is the night sky not to be dreamless,
But with the splendour of clouds' coolness—seamless
For minds to go supple on bliss, be heedless
Of world-weariness that does drive thoughts seedless,
Be blossomed like the loams that are not treeless,
To swim in rapture overwhelming with glee feeless
For them to place their thoughts on and be beefless
About having lives like the trees not leafless.
Magnificent piece! ! ++10++ I hope you read mine 'Night'.....Thanks for sharing.
Penetrating to fill the heart with deepness... this line can really penetrate, thx for sharing,10
wow man! great piece! i'm a big fan of the night sky 2! its one of my inspirations...
You really are great ^_^ it really is inspirational... ^_^ I wish to see the night sky that you've pictured out... This is sooo beautiful...
liked THIS POEM THAT REVERBERATES IN NATURE FOR NATURE AND WITH NATURE...
best poem. keeping the deep thoughts.. i loved it #the night sky
This has to be your best work you have asked me to comment on! Even in rather basic form, to keep the subject matter solid is a great achievement. It was flowing with rhythm and made a great deal of sense! ! I am writing a novel at the moment hence the fact I have been unable to reply. I think it has been a few months but what an eye opener to hear melody like this.... you've taken it to another level.
This is a deep well thought out poem that rhymes time on time. For me it is a poets poem 10+++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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bravo! what a beautiful way to describe night