The Negatives Poem by binayak dutta

binayak dutta

binayak dutta

Silda, Paschim Medinipur, West Bengal, India

The Negatives

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Will you remain constant?
spreading your root towards darkness
do you think of Rhizobium's nest there?
you must be feeling in mars


does your heart tremble seeing dark clouds?
transparent pearls are born there
be saturated so that you can unleash the chain
this is the step to defeat gravity

Tuesday, May 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: defeat,fearless,growing up,hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
you have to cross the line many will try to pull your leg
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2016

does your heart tremble seeing dark clouds? living in hope should be you slogan. kill all negativity...... spreading dark thoughts is not the call of a poet. we are here to change this world through our positive and loving thoughts. very nice poem. go on writing. God bless you. tony

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Binayak Dutta 04 June 2016

thank you sir for valuable comment

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Kelly Kurt 01 June 2016

rather deep poem for such a young man. Very good!

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Binayak Dutta 02 June 2016

thank you very much sir

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 May 2016

Intriguing write and difficult to comprehend. Thanks for sharing.

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Binayak Dutta 26 May 2016

thank you poet

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Silda, Paschim Medinipur, West Bengal, India
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