THE MOUNTAINS Poem by Titos Patríkios

THE MOUNTAINS



First there was the sea.
I was born among islands.
I too an island have temporarily emerged
until I see a light - that too like a stone -
and sink again.
The mountains came later.
I chose them.
I somehow had to share the weight
that had crushed my country for centuries.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 28 November 2018

Titos! ! ! ! Great write! ! ! It is hard to post a comment on a poem when the site jumps every few seconds so I am pasting and copying everything I can. You have set up an interesting scenario for your readers here. There's something magical about creating a scene out of words, isn't there?

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 November 2018

'' The mountains came later. I chose them. I somehow had to share the weight that had crushed my country for centuries. '' a powerful 'finale'

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