The Moment Of Separation - 01 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Moment Of Separation - 01

Rating: 5.0


In that deadly moment,

The moment that separated

You from me.



My Earth stopped

Its revolution,


The Sun absconding from

My gravitational pulls.

The Moment Of Separation - 01
Wednesday, September 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: exile,loneliness,lonely,longing,love and friendship,love and life,separation,shadow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alina Kaikeyi 02 November 2017

My Earth stopped Its revolution, The Sun absconding from My gravitational pulls. Nicely painted the pain of separation. Thanks poet. 10+++

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Pallab Chaudhury 03 October 2017

A nice picture of the moment of separation! I liked it. With best wishes.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 27 September 2017

My Earth stopped Its revolution, The Sun absconding from My gravitational pulls. Beautiful poem sir, loved it. 10 for it.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 27 September 2017

The Sun absconding from My gravitational pulls. Great poem, describing the aftermath of her separation. Thanks for the nice poem. 10++++

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D Priyanka Singh 27 September 2017

My Earth stopped Its revolution, The Sun absconding from My gravitational pulls. Beautifully penned. thanks for the sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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