In that deadly moment,
The moment that separated
You from me.
My Earth stopped
Its revolution,
The Sun absconding from
My gravitational pulls.
A nice picture of the moment of separation! I liked it. With best wishes.
My Earth stopped Its revolution, The Sun absconding from My gravitational pulls. Beautiful poem sir, loved it. 10 for it.
The Sun absconding from My gravitational pulls. Great poem, describing the aftermath of her separation. Thanks for the nice poem. 10++++
My Earth stopped Its revolution, The Sun absconding from My gravitational pulls. Beautifully penned. thanks for the sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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My Earth stopped Its revolution, The Sun absconding from My gravitational pulls. Nicely painted the pain of separation. Thanks poet. 10+++