The Mistic Ocean Poem by John Kim
The Mistic Ocean
It's a beautiful the mistic ocean.
I‘m intoxicating because a unknown mystery.
The Ocean feel as my inside world and
the surf break as drops of water.
The soul was very lonely so came to see a the Ocean's kept a dreamed and
It wanted to be similiar to the Ocean.
The wide the Ocean is the native place of everything life very long time ago.
At the Ocean my mind is easy fall in love if exist person that well suit to me.
I felt the cold weather of life so I came to the Ocean.
Here I seek for that The dream of my soul.
Sometimes the Ocean was melancholy and furious.
It shows to we irdirectly that the various foms of the life
I want eagerly that
always as friend I'll do with Ocean and
permenently I'll live to keep the dream of Ocean.
Pretty good other than the horrible grammar and spelling
I'd like to publish an edited version of your poem. Something like this: The Mystic Ocean Beautiful, the mystic ocean. And I'm drunk again, unknown. A mystery. The Ocean, my inside world. And the surf breaks as drops of water. The Soul, lonely and came to see the Ocean's kept dream, so similar. As wide and as deep, of a place of everything. Life. Sometimes, the Ocean, so melancholy and furious. Was a very long time ago. The Ocean, my mind. Falling. And I felt the coldness of life, so I came to the Ocean. Searching for the dream of my Soul. by John Kim
Your spelling and grammar are both on a kindergarten level. Please consider revising both of these feilds before posting on this or any other website.
...It's spelled 'mystic'. There are quite a few grammatical mistakes here: | And spelling mistakes. I can edit it for you if you want. But if you're going to write poetry in the English language, please use spell check and double check your grammar. Cheers.
very very beautiful indeed... the ocean is so inspiring isnt it. I have a poem about the ocean as well, please read it and comment?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Love the part where you said I felt the cold weather of life so I came to the Ocean. very nice 10