The Metal And The Rod Poem by kimber harrison

The Metal And The Rod



Metal on metal,
Rod on rod.
My heart is covered,
and I feel no God.

A chip in the metal,
a chip in the rod.
But my heart is still covered,
and I feel no God.

A break in the metal,
a break in the rod.
But my heart is still covered,
and I feel no God.

The metal is gone,
along with the rod.
My heart is open,
but still without God.

Without the metal,
without the rod.
My heart is opened,
and now with God.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brianna Trombley 06 December 2008

starting with barriers that block you from God, in the end to lose then and finally find God, reading this i would never guess you are 12

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Kimber Harrison 06 December 2008

Not my best... I have done better

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