The Ludicrous Love Poem by amit bhartiya

The Ludicrous Love



Have u ever been in love?
makes u vulnerable, like the kites above.
open ur chest and opens up ur heart,
allowing to mess up, in ways absurd.


U build up all defenses,
u build up a suit of armor,
To no use it is,
it creeps like a burgular.


The stupid u, the stupid one
wanders into ur stupid world,
And u give them a piece of u,
for which they never asked.

And then one day something
stupid happens,
A kiss, a touch, a smile,
renders u hapless.


And then ur life is
not yours anymore,
confusion, dillema, sleeplessness
outpour.

And then she sends
'may be we should b friends'
leaves u sulking, bemoaning'
and everything ends.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 26 November 2009

nicely penned good poem

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Prashant Shaurya 04 November 2009

flawless is the word amazing.. where had all this been hidden for so long.. well u are a spark dear... god bless love: prashant

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Sujit Sinha 06 October 2009

A good account of adolescent love. So many of our young men go through this phase. I liked your description of love as a kite.

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