The Lasting Silence Poem by Jagannath rao Adukuri

The Lasting Silence

Rating: 5.0


When your eyes go astray and balled
No thumping on the chest revives music
Distant listening and hair in a close mat
An electric shock here, needle piercing there
Does nothing to bring your world back.
There is a red liquid and words trail
There is then silence in place of rhythm
One wanted to bring the final logic in this
In the patternlessness and wild guesses
It did not exactly work and the silence lasted.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jagannath rao Adukuri 04 November 2008

Thanks, marvin for your comment

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Marvin Brato 04 November 2008

Death is a lasting silence to which life surrenders, but Gods awakes those who have faith in Him! A 10.

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