The next stop is the one I've waited for so long,
So eager now to see the smiling folks back home,
For memory now plays an old well-known love song,
Ever drawing one back, no matter where they roam.
So eager now to see the smiling folks back home,
And to frequent all the places that I used to go!
It ever draws one back, no matter where they roam,
Like honeycomb draws bees, toward golden tomorrow.
And to frequent all the places that I used to go,
I'll surely take the pleasure of a prolonged visit.
Like honeycomb draws bees toward golden tomorrow,
Skies tell the late hour, when stained and vivid!
I'll surely take the pleasure of a prolonged visit,
For memory now plays an old well-known love song.
Skies tell the late hour, when stained and vivid,
The next stop is the one I've waited for so long!
It is long time since i have seen a locomotive. The engine and the whistle is still fresh and permanently itched in my memory. Brilliant poem with fantastic painting.5***
A very pleasant pantoum to read, I enjoyed enormously, nostalgian thoughts well worded, beautiful!
Excellent pantoum Evelyn. It was a pleasure to read this style after do long. Beautiful. Made my heart smile. The theme of poem is nostalgic memories so well presented through this style. Good job. In to my favourite.
The recurring lines enhanced the beauty of this write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A wonderful and touching poem full of great memories. This poem resonates with me. Another marvelous poem adorn with great images and nice rhythm