The Last Of My Family Poem by Krissy Alley

The Last Of My Family

Rating: 5.0


There is this person that is part of me,
I love her to death, she is my everything
We grew up together and saw many things
But here we are holding on strong
I know I can lean on her and she can lean on me
We hide many secerts that will never be set free
Many fights we had involving fists, feet and a video tape
But we always love each other no matter the case
Our mother died in 2004
But that didn't stop us from facing our dreams
She is the only family I have left
She is my sister and my bestfriend

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Dodd 09 February 2010

go for the big finish always! good poem take it all the way which is often one more poetic line! he is my sister and my bestfriend (our bonds began before birth continue to the end of earth) I could just say nice poem stay safe reading and never getting to know the places you could go the magic carpet that words can help you ride if I cared more about the poet than the words but the poet is supposed to serve the poem like a serf

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