Driving down a road
On stretch called "Dead Man's Pass"
Little did she know
Today would be her last
Driving in her car
As the music played she sang
The last thing she would hear
Was the gun as it went bang
Just one shot rang out
As it flashed in the dark
The gunman took his aim
He never missed his mark
He had just one thing on his mind
Was his job, and that was to kill
This was not his first time
As he did it with such skill
You see this was not random
It was an ordered hit
She would die in the car
Right where she did sit
Now it took the authorities
Some time to figure this out
When the investigation was completed
In their minds there was no doubt
It seem that her husband
Hired someone to do the hit
Because in his future plans
She just didn't fit
He found she had cheated
With another man
It happened to be his best friend
That he could not stand
So he wanted her dead
He didn't care about the cost
To him it didn't matter
He now knew his life was lost
He had to send a message
So all others would know
That if you crossed him
His ruthless side would show
All he had to do
Was to order her killed
It was like placing a food order
With his order being filled
The authorities could not prove
That he was the one
Who hired a hit man
To get the dirty deed done
The shooter in this case
Could never be found
For all they know he could be
Lying somewhere under ground
10-31-20/RjH
Actually I am wondering why the husband never ordered a hit on his best friend also, both his best friend and his wife betrayed his trust.
Wicked or deviI can roam everywhere HeII can roam everywhere Like the pious of heaven no one knows him/her or their address though everyone lives with them or they are in us coz- the deviI changes name, address, dress up, get up.............
A vivid depiction of a heinous crime. Very poignant yet well crafted.
the title fits the lines you have written an extremely good poem, on an ordered hit, an option that never should be chosen, all the reasons are given, a life choice a soul choice, taken by all murders, those that kill themselves and those that hire killings
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I wrote the poem 'Unforgiving Cold-Blooded Inhumane', inspired by the poem 'The Hit', by the poet Ray Hansell and dedicated to Ray Hansell.