The Gift Poem by Barbara Attaway

The Gift

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We had hiked the hills a long, long way
My privilege was to gift their feet that day
Soak in warm water, soothe with mint lotion
Seemed to me just the right heaven-sent potion
My desire, you see, was to mimic my Lord

Their refusal to allow it caught me off guard
My gift was unwanted, unaccepted, and scorned
No concern had they; oh, my heart was torn
It occurred to me then how my Savior's gift waits
To be opened and entered as tabernacle gates

Will His everlasting Gift I glibly ignore
As He washes my feet on His infinite shore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 24 March 2008

It occurred to me then how my Savior's gift waits To be opened and entered as tabernacle gates Miltonic way of expression... nice one

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Sim Dan 23 December 2007

Hey, there, nce poetry and nice person behind the poem! Enjoyed reading. Thank you.

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Barbara Attaway

Barbara Attaway

Beaumont, Texas, USA
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