The Gaze Poem by Shweta Patke

The Gaze



They looked turbid
Searching for some answers
Who lost and who gained
It was a gamble
Somebody had to win
They looked as if they had gone deep inside, like an abyss
Where light was darker then darkness
Like an ocean which parted with its ale for a twerp
Yet looked so vast and mysterious
Like a nocturne
One of a kind
Chaste as ever
Feeling the emotions and winning the ride

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nitin Suresh 13 June 2007

Shwetha, the clever interplay of words is interesting and perhaps reflect life in general and gamble and roller coaster of life

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