Shelter Poem by Shweta Patke

Shelter



I saw you staring at me
I felt at home in your eyes
A place where I can stay till eternity

You closed your eyes it was dark in there
But first time the night was so warm
Warmth which I was longing for all life long
I was lost in your eyes like a child lost in a fairy tale
Felt like a prayer born in your starry eyed gaze

Like a dream debouched in your eyes
Confined in shadows but not less than meadows

Please let me stay in there for a while
Please let me stay in there for a while
With you as a dreamer
I don’t want to be a lost mile
I don’t want to be a lost mile

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddharth Singh 26 July 2009

Your lover's eye is surely a great place to be sheltered in. Great work.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 12 September 2008

The longing is fantastic.Thanks for this intense poem.

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