The Gardener's Wisdom Poem by elysabeth faslund

The Gardener's Wisdom

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From what mountaintop did you
Gain wisdom?
Did you cherish the ledges you
Gained the summits with?

What will you use to climb back
Down?
Did you ever notice...watching
Eagles tumbling, playing...
Their talons curled?
Withdrawn?
Not hurting?

Perhaps mate. Perhaps usurper
Of mountain spirits.
Sky spirits.
Never rending...holding you
Cloud-high, spirit-cloaked...until
You realized...no going back.
Never to walk Gardens again.

Keeping your wisdom on mountains
Of ice. Glaciers.
Lonely, misted memories of
Delicately touching Roses...
Empresses of Earth-bound,
Sweet Gardens.

Mountains keep your remains.
Once you were a careful Gardener...
But, exchanged that...for
Wisdom.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 26 April 2008

Even wisdom comes not without a price! Obvious depth of thought. Excellent...

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Thad Wilk 16 April 2008

A splendid poem Elysabeth! ! A pleasure to read indeed! ! ! *10*! ! Best regards! , Friend Thad

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... a delicately touching piece, stylish and thought-provoking. t x

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Leinad Yancm 16 April 2008

very nice poem, read hall of obscurity, days of the past and basic instinct.

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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