The First Things A Male Baby Sees Poem by Ajay Ohri

The First Things A Male Baby Sees

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The first things a male baby sees
Is either a womb or a maternal feeding tree

Twenty years later, these subconscious memories,
Will turn gentle boys into phallic beasts

Was the above too rude too adult for you
Too mature for your computed sensitivity

Excuse the literary atrocity /monstrosity
The poet got carried away by occasional pomposity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madina Morris 05 January 2012

hmmm...its really interstang, can't put my finger on it but its something about your poem that makes me want to keep reading. as a writer that is a plus, so i think u really have something. thank you for sharing you words.

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