The Eyes Betray Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Eyes Betray

Rating: 4.8


My lips denied him
My arms could never hold him
My eyes betrayed me.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 13 June 2019

A small poem poem sets you thinking. Here eyes betrayed, but even the kiss could have, even the embrace might have. Lovely.

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Kostas Lagos 13 June 2019

Three lines were enough to unfold your talent Rose Marie

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Nosheen Irfan 14 June 2019

Love is often bitter. How beautifully you have summed it up in just three lines. Kudos!

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Prabir Gayen 12 June 2019

My lips denied him My arms could never hold him My eyes betrayed me.

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Jane Campion 12 June 2019

Love is blind and is not defined. A short poem that has many layers.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 August 2022

Brilliant top 5

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Kesav Easwaran 18 February 2020

Enjoyed your good three liner. Thanks for sharing Rose Marie 10+

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Anjandev Roy 07 November 2019

Wonderful. Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Anjandev Roy 12 July 2019

Great write. You have some special ability to write this type of short poem.Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 July 2019

Beautifully conceived, poem that is very thought-provoking, loveliest rendered about love Thank you so much for sharing this profound brevity, dear great poetess! A 10 Full Score.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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