The Eggs Crack Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I admire such innocence and receptivity: it's as if the poet is being born anew in each moment. Thus it is fitting that the empty place in his heart is filled. It is fitting that the poet is quick to recognize the miracle that appears.

Restless I was I didn't know what I am looking for Suddenly I noticed a sound of another crack, A beautiful female bird came out of the twin egg, Understood the secret, got everything nothing I lack! it's a beautiful and excellent poem; I enjoyed

The superb imagery and the way this write has been executed make a reader a witness of the wonders of nature and life itself. I concur with the beautiful comments of Poet Dennis Mair. So wonderfully penned Onto my Poem List.

A beautiful female bird came out of the twin egg, Understood the secret, got everything nothing I lack! THIS EGG CRACKING ONLY PROVES Y AND X SHOULD NOT EVER BE LACKING PUSH ORWARDS MORE EGGS BREAKING HUMANS AND CROWS BIRDS AND BEES ALL ARE ALWAYS SEXING POPULATION EXPLOSION IS A SUPPOSITION ALL MUST FOLLOW THE LIFE'S TRADITION AND ADD ON ONE MORE EVERY NINE MONTHS HUMANS MUST BE EACH TIME A NEWER INNOVATION WOW ANOTHER TEN CRACKED I DID HEAR JA SIR

A lovely piece of work sir! My favorite lines: Saw butterflies kissing the inviting petals/Listened to the love song of the bumble bees/Felt aroma of flowers and smell of ripen fruits/I missed something still hidden in the trees! Top score

Magnificence secret. Added to my poem list.