The Doctor And Me Poem by lady grace

The Doctor And Me

Rating: 5.0


When I looked at him
saw the syringe in his hands
felt heaven beside me
awhile pain will be gone…

at bed so soft and cold
white paints from ceiling to floor
flowers of large vases
windows are closed…also the door

heard voices again
an hour when I opened my eyes
all whites surrounded me
and saw him with slippers on hand…

their smiles comfort me
increase the drip from the bottle
inject another shot of nubain
to make me sleep again…

for 12 hours I slept
dreams appeared in different scenes
there are mountains and valleys
and also rivers and streams

the moment I opened my eyes
he was already beside me
he said, ” I am your doctor”
will you please behave and look at me…

he gave instructions
and told me what I’ve done
then I remember, when I arrived ER
he was him i asked to keep my slippers…huhuhuhuwaaaaaaaaa

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Loved the poetic story tell! Wonderfully done.; D

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Akram Awadat 15 July 2010

wow, very nice good poem, i like the lines

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Eyan Desir 10 July 2010

Goood ability u have turning real life experience into a poem good write

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Oyelakin Gbolahan 09 July 2010

In times of pains, learn to look up to God for help...He is all Help we've got in time of need... This is quite expressional...like it...hope you latter got a succour? Read my poem too... and add me in ur friend list

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Sadiqullah Khan 09 July 2010

May God give you perfect health Lady. (Bouque from me) .10

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