The Day I Fell In Love Poem by Max Okere

The Day I Fell In Love

Rating: 5.0


I lay on my bed everyday,
with nothing but the thoughts of you coming my way.

i try to overcome these thoughts,
but i seem to weak to even have them sought.

when i see your smile,
I just sit down and think for a while.

i think of how an angel like you
could almost be impossible to be true.

your ranging beauty has no depths in size,
even with all these qualities you are also wise.

when i looked straight into your eyes,
It was like looking through the ties of prize.

i always try my best to tell you how i feel,
but i can't even speak, because of your beautiful zeal.

the first time i opened my mouth to speak to you,
you gave me a smile that i still pursue without clue.

for everyday, that is what i think of,
The day i fell in love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kimi Mulero 21 August 2008

Awwwww! ♥ Oh, wow, Max! ! It's incredibly heartwarming and touching! ! ///.^= It is very VERY beautiful, I really enjoyed the combanation of both love and shiness! KEEP WRITING ON! ! ! XD I present you with an A++! XP Your Dear Friend, Kimi ♥

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Marilyn Lott 18 August 2008

Very sweet and heartfelt, Max. Keep writing and sharing with us. I give you a '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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