The Confession For The Past... Poem by Vikrant Jog

The Confession For The Past...

Rating: 5.0


The disturbing lone,
The thoughtless fake,
The emotional tone,
For my own sake,

Drawn mentally irate,
The celestial pain,
Not a single good mate,
Crawling in for a gain,

He though,
Never gets angry with his child,
I although,
Left no room to hate him wild,

Foolish,
Shameless,
Hopeless,
Me,
Crying for a mixed sympathy,

Bow down to you,
My father,
You are great,
Forgive and give me a chance,
To improve my mistake,
I oath you now,
Won't let you down again,
Be with me,
Not a ting will remain,
Of the solitary pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yash Shinde 12 March 2014

lovely........u deeply confessed ur mistakes, beautifully penned......i must say.

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Payal Parande 12 February 2013

nice one.....................

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Hazel Durham 03 February 2013

Our heavenly father forgives us for all our mistakes and just waits for our return to his fold! Great write!

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Poetheart Morgan 02 February 2013

Tell him of your repentance. Is it all and just what he expects.

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Unwritten Soul 02 February 2013

Because father knows what the best, we know that once we really angry about things but then when time raise us a mind and wise we know that things that father said was true, again and again...nice write_Soul

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