The Clever Master Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

The Clever Master

Rating: 3.1


Oh master! Oh master
There has been a disaster
I don't know what to do
And the one who'll tell me is you
Alright, I will tell you
What you have to do
You take your album and look
Or make a picture book
Or go and bow
To the king very low
Or drink milk from a cow
And don't ask me how
Oh! that was very nice
And you didn't even tell lies
You are great, oh master
And you have stopped the disaster.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 March 2007

Well it rhymes and it flows line after line, now i have just got to get it out of my mind...Risha... eight or nine, na... Ten should just be fine...

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Raghavan Warrier 01 December 2006

Risha, Nice rhyme and the whole poem has infact a structure of a nursery rhymes. Believe me it is very tough to write a nice nursery rhyme. Very good one.

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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