The Captain Poem by Ari Alsio

The Captain

Rating: 5.0


cyclones to rest
ripples of gentle breeze
man can sail smoothly,
if the captain of the ship,
is a firm mind and calm glans

Friday, October 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 23 December 2015

Nice work with the muse of life and nature! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Agatha Eliza 21 October 2015

Even during the storm, a strong character can make a difference. Beautiful poem,10

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Ari Alsio 21 October 2015

The storms of our character is weighed. Thank you Agatha.

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Liza Sudina 09 October 2015

firm and calm - captain Ari - you are romantic!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 October 2015

Great write. An efficient and brave captain can successfully take out his ship through cyclones. Thanks for sharing. Ten.

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Ari Alsio 09 October 2015

Thank you, that was my message

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