The Burnt Cake Poem by Toshie Nohara

The Burnt Cake

Rating: 5.0


Pretty icing with
fresh flowers
Burnt cake on
the table
Twelve year old
comforting herself
Next attempt could
be better
There's still plenty
of flour
And butter
And eggs and
sugar
And I am going
to bake again
and again
You see!

Friday, November 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 20 November 2015

Very smooth sailing. simple and beautiful.

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Rahman Henry 20 November 2015

My vote for your poem: 10+++++++++++++

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Rahman Henry 20 November 2015

Yes, next attempt could be better... try again and again.... we all are with this hope; excellent poem to read again and again.....

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