The Broken Heart Poem by Anderlee Goforth

The Broken Heart

Rating: 5.0


You said you loved me you said wanted to keep me so why did you brake my heart and tried to fix it with all your little love song. So why did you brake my heart? Why did you destroy my life I thought you loved meso why? You said you will always love me but you lied to me why you knew what i will do so answer me this one question why did you hurt me and make my heart break? You told me you wanted me by your side forever so why did you crush my heart so you never caried if i died.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 19 June 2009

Good work.........time heals everything they say..........but not a wound from a broken heart...........nicely written......... u need to check the spellings again........and try to break it in stanzas.......which will give it a nice presentable look........... ;)

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Zachary Clark 26 February 2009

It's a pretty poem and hope any heart break be healed by god.

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Raiyuken Senshu 21 February 2009

needs editing, but its a good concept, has emotion, has potential to be a good poem.

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