The Beach.... Poem by Apurva Agnihotri

The Beach....

Rating: 4.5


Walking on the beach on the soft sand..
Warm and at places wet..
A cool.. but a bit salty breeze.. blows...
At times bringing the scent of the ship that just left....
Leaving me on this island.. alone.. with my thoughts..
As i lift a small shell lying on the ground..
And i lift another.. and another.. which leads me to a big shell..
Where underneath a heart... beats..
I sit there.. smiling.. near my new discovery..
And see the sea water.. wash away the foot marks i just left behind..
As the wind keeps blowing..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 16 June 2014

When the biggest truth is revealed the illusions appeared like foot prints are washed away. A nice poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 December 2013

This is a nice poem. I have rated it 9/10. 'A cool.. but a bit salty breeze.. blows... At times bringing the scent of the ship that just left.... ' Nice depiction.

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Marvin Brato 03 October 2013

To be remembered is to write poems that soothes the soul, this is like a footprint that can not be wash away!

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Khairul Ahsan 13 September 2013

A soft, soothing poem like a cool breeze.

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Shraddha The Poetess 11 September 2013

vryy nice.description... good to read it..... i invite u to read my poetries..........

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