The Battle Of Life Poem by Zubaida Boland
The Battle Of Life
it owns many names
it has many kinds
one type is more painful than the other?
did u guess it now?
if you didn't
don't worry
i have more things to explain
it tortures your soul
and kills it when you're alive
it can affect any part of your body
that you can't survive
if you do survive
then you're a hero
and you just won the battle
between life and death
but you should struggle first
because there were many people who gave up
they died as they lost this battle
if you need help
don't worry
i'll try to find the cure
i hope i do
once you're diagnosed with it
you feel down
but don't you ever lose your faith
because our god is always there
when the slaves need help
all you've got to do is pray
don't let weakness take over you
you can be stronger than that
if it's called cancer,
then you can be the whale
so don't give up
just pray as i told you
and you'll never fail.
Battle is a must for life. Surprisingly, all of living creature trying to live long here but all faces an ending! Your poem is finely composed. I liked it
perfect is nothing compared to your choice in selecting the right words I really liked it and thanks for ur comment God bless you
lovely way of installing courage and confdence in a starking patient yet dying by the hope of cure, when ruefully losing day by day, as i lost my lovely sister and sister in-law before me one after another so painfully inspite of best possible treatment of modern world of medication, alas! ! ! , anyhow this the faith that has to be incalcated in the mind of the patiece, , , , , , , I the faith therapy as...I MUST LIVE, , great write, I do admire 10/10, thanks for sharing
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4/28/2024 5:04:29 AM # 1.0.0.1119
but don't you ever lose your faith because our god is always there when the slaves need help all you've got to do is pray don't let weakness take over you you can be stronger than that if it's called cancer, then you can be the whale great and good verses..great lines..meaningful... poemis really a rich and explanatory one.. with satsifactory flow.... well doen dear poet...10++++++++