The Bar 66 Poem by James Clive

The Bar 66

Rating: 5.0


The bar was empty
I pulled up a stool
The barmaid came near
Beer please
Hours later i felt so alive
Electric
Ecstatic
King of the world
The bar was still empty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frances May 23 June 2008

fab poem! So simple yet so witty.

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Trucker Jeff 23 June 2006

That's a good one James. Sometimes poems aren't suppose to solve the worlds problems...Sometimes a simple smile is enough. The Bar 66... I think I've been there.

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