The Animal. Poem by Tom Allport

The Animal.

Rating: 5.0

I take my coat off
I smile as wide as I can
I greet spiders
I want to shine
I become balm
I take the garbage out
I move furniture
I stand
I... the animal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 15 November 2023

short and meaningful, need more consideration, spider and balm here used as symbols, in competence with the world of human being, well-done, keep writing and get blessed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 November 2023

A very thought provoking poem well crafted. Humanity is wrapped with mystery like life itself.

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Kingsley Egbukole 15 November 2023

Very active and lively

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Anjandev Roy 15 November 2023

Brilliantly expressed......thanks for sharing....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 November 2023

Bravo Tom! ! ! ! TFS

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Soran M. H 15 November 2023

why not? there are some similarity and difference between human and animal, even some times the animal has moRe value and better qualities.. excellent work

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