The Ancient Mountain - Haiku Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Ancient Mountain - Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Into the deep woods
Of a huge ancient mountain
The wind sings freedom.

Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 27 October 2021

This is a profound piece....thanks a lot

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M Asim Nehal 28 October 2021

Perfect imagery. Deep woods in calm and peace with self and the ancient mountain the solitude and strong. Full ******

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Sandra Feldman 28 October 2021

A most beautiful sensation and message with a natural and great breath of Freedom. Exceptional imagery and poetic liberation,

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Wonderful haiku with a very spiritual and uplifting message.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 31 October 2021

Lovely imagery of being lost in tranquil nature.5 stars.

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

Sh ++t! .... 'I woudn't know a Haiku from a hole in the ground.' That is not an original (by me) saying, ....except for the word 'Haiku'. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

oops! .....But 'I wouldn't know a

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

Not bad! But

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Rob Lamberton 05 March 2023

Wild and free deep in the old growth forest. I can almost smell it!

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David Wood 05 November 2021

I feel I'm there listening to the wind. Lovely Haiku, a good 5

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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