That Double Rainbow Poem by Aldo Kraas

That Double Rainbow



That double rainbow
I saw in the sky after
The rain ended today
Late in the afternoon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jean Dament 07 November 2009

Your poem is a little too short & so disappoints me to read it. I would put 'Awww ' in front of 'that double rainbow' for emphasis. I have noticed that all your poems tend to be too brief-can you not try to add more imagery & description for our interest sake? Ravensong

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Aldo Kraas

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Sao Paulo Brazil
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