Tell Your Tale, O’ River Poem by Sreekala Sukumaran

Tell Your Tale, O’ River

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O’ river your are so calm,
Nice to see way you flow,
Love to watch the sun set,
So attractive you look then.

O’ river you are so calm,
Delightful to feel your presence,
At night you glitter so intimately,
Charming moon is looking at you.

O’ river you are so calm,
So pleasant to be here at night,
Lying on this soft sand of yours,
Make me think deep of you.

O’ river you are so calm,
Don’t feel shy to tell your tales,
Seen happy and sad moments,
As since ages you keep flowing through…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amrit Rathi 11 June 2010

A charming poem on river and its calmness in different settings. Nicely penned. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 June 2010

Delightful to feel your presence, At night you glitter so intimately, Charming moon is looking at you. your wonderfufl thoughts on the calm river.. one tendency i see now in ur new poems. you have become simple in writing and not using complicated words. it is a nice development. you feel free and i sense it in your poems. thank you sree

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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 June 2010

on this soft sand of yours, Make me think deep of you................... ..ravishing ripples as yet mellow slithering breeze by its side swoons pain heart rejoices by deep ecstasy beams of white when spills over its haste, yet most passionate write by imagery, yet emotive.10+++, thanks for sharing

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Ravi Sathasivam 12 June 2010

Beautiful write on river. Nice to see way your words flow. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+++

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Beautiful! Calm and serene write. A wealthy river full of knowledge. Enjoyed the read, ; D

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Hans Vr 11 June 2010

Very wll writen. seeks to our imagination. Keep on writing Thanks

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