Tell Me You Love Me Poem by Toni Bellanger

Tell Me You Love Me

Rating: 4.9


I love you,
I need you,
I want you,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?

You're beautiful,
You're funny,
You're strong,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?

I'm trying,
I'm hurting,
I'm yours,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?

You kiss me,
You touch me,
You have me,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?

Is it me?
Is it you?
Is it her?
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?

We'd be happy,
We'd be stable,
We'd be more,
If you could
Tell me you love me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 29 May 2009

Just has that asking for love feeling.

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The Dreamer 30 May 2009

Bless really nice and i hope he told you he loves you - if you love someone you should tell them every day but sometime its just nice to know they do.

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Lady Grace 30 May 2009

this is a beautiful poem.your real emotion is written here..but don't be confused of your feelings, love will just come in a right time...grace

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Karamia Smith 01 June 2009

this is amazing! i love your use of repetetion here too.

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Gordon Wilkinson 01 June 2009

Now i understand why everything is in one block, although if i were you i would try to use a computer rather than a phone. As for this poem, normally i hate lines being repeated, but i think this is one of the rare occasions this works for me.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 August 2009

Love is beautiful and ugly.Your poem is beautiful!

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Kushal Vaishnani 06 June 2009

Nice persuasive write-up... Repetition of words gives impressive effect.. You convey what you want to say without even an iota haziness.10 +++++ Regards Kushal

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 June 2009

I like the structure you have. The repetition of a phrase is always a good device. I also liked the purpose behind this writing. And the focus was clear. Good job. GW62

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I love you............................... good poem. hehe

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James Fumich 04 June 2009

i really enjoyed this poem it was really welll written and im always a sucker for love peotry... so 10/10 here

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