Tell Me Poem by Tears From A Soldiers Eyes

Tell Me

Rating: 5.0


Tell me I wasn't true
Tell me I didn't believe in you
Tell me a moment I didn't share
Tell me when I acted like I didn't care
Tell me a moment with me that was hard to bear
Tell me when I was fake
Tell me the time we spent wasn't great
Tell me I wasn't a good friend
Tell me I wouldn't have your back until the end
Tell me I treated you like a child
Tell me a time I couldn't make you smile
Tell me a time I didn't miss you
Tell me I never kissed you
Tell me a time I used you
Tell me a time I abused you
Tell me you're not all I have
Tell me when I didn't speak on your behalf
Tell me when I didn't have your back
What I'm seeing I feel like you're telling me all of that

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeanette Krantz 09 February 2007

this one caught and kept my attention until the end its so sad how ppl treat each other....or how we don't appreciate what we have until its too late

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Deanna More 06 February 2007

. Sensing negativity towards you, (in actions + attitude) , from a girl, you love + care for - is a hard burden to bear, especially when this person is, obviously, in DENIAL. 'Tell me...Tell me....Tell me....' and your response to her be...''You're wrong! ! ! ! '' Favorite line? Last line! ''What I'm seeing, 'I feel 'like you're telling me all of that.'' (Clever wording!) Excellent poem! Really stirs the emotions. Deanna xx

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