Tears Poem by Joan Redolosa

Tears



They were like the rain
beautifully falling
from the velvet sky.
One by one they drop,
upon your face they land.
Tears and rain,
almost the same.
Both touches the face
and alleviates pain.

Wednesday, May 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,pain,poem,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 21 May 2016

Insightful train of thought on small drops of pain (tears) and their therapeutic effects, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Joan.

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They alleviates pain.Nice write.

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Joan Redolosa 19 May 2016

Thank you. It means a lot :)

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Somnath Chakraborty 19 May 2016

i am a new poet too but this is a highly admirable poem-a great work-truly

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