They were like the rain
beautifully falling
from the velvet sky.
One by one they drop,
upon your face they land.
Tears and rain,
almost the same.
Both touches the face
and alleviates pain.
i am a new poet too but this is a highly admirable poem-a great work-truly
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Insightful train of thought on small drops of pain (tears) and their therapeutic effects, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Joan.