Tanka - As Memory Dust Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - As Memory Dust

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let time preserve us
in memorials and tombs
as memory dust ~
will speak about our valor:
how we resisted the storm

Friday, March 22, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 23 March 2024

Life is not so easy and smooth...how we cross over the obstacles is what matters a lot...nice write...liked

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 March 2024

This touching, lovely poem is in my Favorites. Wonderful writing!

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Darren Jkoeryo 22 March 2024

Settling of memories with time is a great phrase, I liked the way you drafted it.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 22 March 2024

Memories- precious. Nice Tanka having a beautiful structure

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