Tall Trees Poem by Kayla Lines

Tall Trees



Tall trees all around
If I climb up will I fall down,
Up & up & up it makes me go
Till I scream let me go
I look at the people way down there
Can they see me I want to know,
If I call out will they hear
Will my mother start to tear
If she sees me all the way up here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 22 July 2009

hmmm there is forest of trees and you are blocked and no way to go around or out...sure..this is your success and dream like poem..liked its way of writing and idea is sweet and deep..again..

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Kayla Lines 24 August 2007

I am Kayla the writer of this poem and in the second last line it is tear as in cry not tear as in rip

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