Taking A Break Poem by Tia Maria

Taking A Break

Rating: 5.0


Will you miss me while I am gone
Five days just seems so long
We may just go a bit insane
But soon I'll be back again

Taking a break sadly
takes me from you
I will dream of you as
I breathe in the view

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 23 September 2008

It will grow even stronger good write Chris 10

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Tj Becker 23 September 2008

5 days can be an eternity when away from what you treasure. Your poems are always full of emotion, no matter how short the read.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 23 September 2008

Five Days, to write some more..; -) Andy 10

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